Try to explain WHAT convergence actually is in your intro.
Your second paragraph begins well with points about the advantages of working with the Weinsteins BUT when mentioning the posters you should have mention the poster which also mimices The Social Network. You could also mention WHY there is little convergence in terms of sfx etc.
Your mentioning of audience participation is good BUT try and be specific in terms of giving an example.
Your section on Kick Ass is stronger, and your examples are more focused. You begin to include details on audience, try and consider how web content would appeal. Another thing to consider is how the film was a British 'twist' on an American genre.
You need to mention which companies, stars and directors were in the film (remember Brad Pitt produced the film).
Try to also use more terminology in your responses (see my blog for key words).
Try to explain WHAT convergence actually is in your intro.
ReplyDeleteYour second paragraph begins well with points about the advantages of working with the Weinsteins BUT when mentioning the posters you should have mention the poster which also mimices The Social Network. You could also mention WHY there is little convergence in terms of sfx etc.
Your mentioning of audience participation is good BUT try and be specific in terms of giving an example.
Your section on Kick Ass is stronger, and your examples are more focused. You begin to include details on audience, try and consider how web content would appeal. Another thing to consider is how the film was a British 'twist' on an American genre.
You need to mention which companies, stars and directors were in the film (remember Brad Pitt produced the film).
Try to also use more terminology in your responses (see my blog for key words).
I would award this essay 26/40